The Out-of-Tune E String
~6 min · 1,275 words
It took him exactly three seconds to let go of her.
"Your pulse is at one hundred twenty," he said, without immediately pulling his fingers away.
"It's the humidity, Calle. And the fact that you're ten centimeters away from invading my airspace."
Sara took a step back, rubbing her wrist where the warm pressure of Matías's fingers still left a phantom shadow. Classroom 3 still smelled of enclosed wood and the copal varnish that the five o'clock heat softened until it grew dense. On the shared music stand, the 2B pencil markings seemed to mock her: Sara: air here. As if he knew exactly when she was running out of oxygen.
"Your shirt looks ridiculous on me," she added, pointing to the olive green corduroy soaked at the armhole. "Give it back to me before you rot it."
"It's my amulet. Besides, the suede on the elbows cushions the bridge. You should thank me."
"I'll thank you when you move to another orchestra."
The classroom door didn't just open; it creaked as if someone had kicked it with pedagogical disdain.
Ezequiel Pineda didn't fully enter. He remained framed in the threshold, with a black folder under his arm and his tortoiseshell glasses hanging from a frayed leather strap.
"To the Lido. Both of you. Now."
"Maestro, we still need to fine-tune measure seventy-fou—"
"I said now, Ospina," Pineda cut in, turning halfway around in the hallway. "And bring your cases. Friday's gala is for the ticket-paying public and the politicians who pretend to understand Bartók. Franz Gruber didn't come to Medellín to drink lukewarm champagne."
Sara and Matías looked at each other.
"Gruber already arrived?" she asked, feeling her throat as dry as chalk.
"He arrived an hour ago," Pineda's back replied from the staircase. "And he's sitting in row eighteen of the seating pit. If you play the way you just argued, I'll spare him the return ticket to Vienna and send you both to play carols at a shopping mall."
The stage of the Teatro Lido smelled of centuries-old dust, damp velvet, and crushed rosin on fir boards. From the center of the proscenium, the hall looked like a dark cave where the only visible life was the amber glow filtering obliquely through the high louvers, casting the shadows of the music stands like very long bars over the waxed parquet.
Way back there, in the thick gloom of row eighteen, the screen of a tablet glowed. Barely a motionless silhouette.
The Viennese delegate.
For the next twenty minutes, Sara allowed herself three prohibitions: no looking toward row eighteen, no letting the sweat make her fingers slip during the position change, and no thinking about what Matías had written in the margin of measure eighty.
"The ceiling fan is going to drive me crazy," Matías whispered, adjusting the music stand with a dry kick of his foot.
Above, three rusty blades spun with an agonizing hum that competed directly with the ticking of the mechanical metronome left behind on the upright piano to the left of the stage.
"Ignore it," said Sara, taking the violin out of its faded blue plush case.
"It's in a seven-eighths time signature. It's rhythmically destabilizing."
"You're rhythmically destabilizing."
"That was a compliment three years ago, Ospina."
"It wasn't a compliment."
Sara rested the instrument under her chin, adjusting the angle so the tailpiece wouldn't rub against her sweaty collarbone. Her fingers instinctively sought the A string, brushing against the silver winding worn out by weeks of relentless friction. The roughness of the callus on the tip of her left index finger emitted an almost imperceptible hiss as she pressed the fingerboard.
Sara's phone vibrated inside the pocket of her linen pants. Two short knocks.
[17:04] Cami: Are you still alive or did you already kill each other with the bows? If you faint, fall on his violin, not yours.
Sara locked the screen without answering. She had no head for ironies.
"Let's tune," Matías ordered in a low voice, adjusting his shoulder posture.
The dry, tense creak of the ebony pegs yielding a millimeter under the pressure of his thumbs echoed against the empty wood of the stalls. Matías frowned. He tugged at the peg of his E string, that treacherous, thin string of bare steel that in Medellín always seemed about to snap because of the rain-laden air.
A sharp screech.
"It's slipping," he muttered, gently tapping the head of the pegbox with his palm. "The humidity of this hole is going to burst it."
"Rub some chalk on it," Sara suggested, without looking at him, passing her bow over the rosin with short, mechanical movements.
"I didn't bring any."
"Always so prepared, Calle."
"I have water in the dressing room. Give me two minutes before Pineda comes down from the lighting booth."
"If you take ninety seconds, the Austrian is going to think you got stage diarrhea."
"If I take ninety seconds it's because I'm making sure you don't throw my G string out of tune while I'm not looking."
Matías rested his violin on the padded bench of the first music stand—the instrument resting on its side, with the vulnerable bridge exposed to the cold air of the wings—and disappeared behind the side curtain with quick steps.
Silence.
The theater breathed with it. The only sound was the rusted groan of the blades on the ceiling and the distant drip of a faucet in the backstage bathrooms.
Sara lowered her own violin and walked over to the bench to pick up the eraser that had fallen near Matías's case. The wooden floor creaked beneath her worn loafers. As she bent down, the smell of cedar and pulverized rosin from her rival's open case hit her nose, mixed with that touch of cheap lavender that the scores he kept always had.
She was about to stand up when the amber light from the louver fell directly on the pegbox of Matías's instrument.
There it was.
The ebony peg of the E string had a transverse fissure, a pale, microscopic thread that started at the hole of the barrel and extended to the paddle. The wood was fatigued, parting barely a micron under the brutal tension of the metal.
Sara stood motionless, one hand suspended in mid-air.
An adjustment was all it took. Not even out of malice: a simple quarter turn during the last chord of the prelude, when the piece demanded moving from a melody in a low position to the super-high register in fortissimo. The wood wouldn't withstand the torsion. The peg would snap clean, the E string would shoot off like a whip, and Matías would be left mute at the culminating measure.
In front of the Vienna delegate.
No blood. No apparent cheating. Just the bad luck of an old instrument and the ungrateful climate of the tropics.
The scholarship would be hers before the afternoon was over.
Winning because the other person breaks a string doesn't make you a soloist; it makes you the mute witness to someone else's disaster.
Her grandfather's voice sounded so clear in her head that Sara pulled her hand away from the pegbox as if the wood were glowing red. Her fingertips tingled, calloused and rough, loaded with six years of rage, seven o'clock rehearsals, borrowed shirts he wouldn't return, and marginal notes telling her how to breathe.
She took a step back. Then another.
From the back of the pit, in the gloom of row eighteen, Franz Gruber's silhouette leaned slightly forward in his seat.
Matías's footsteps were already echoing hurriedly down the wooden hallway behind the curtain.
End of Episode 3 · of 4
The Out-of-Tune E String
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