Waves of Salt and Spite·Episode 03

The Westerly Break

~7 min · 1,440 words

Iván swallowed hard. The reddish metal, hanging from a frayed black cord against his collarbone, seemed to burn his skin almost as much as her gaze did.

"I found it," he said at last, his voice too low to compete with the sound of water breaking twenty meters away. "In an old tackle box. On the loading dock."

"Lull."

Abril didn't blink. The sea salt was drying on her eyelashes, tight and hard like frost, but she didn't even bother rubbing her eyes. She knew every dent, every one of the three hand-filed notches in that copper cylinder. Her grandmother didn't take off that whistle even to sleep on storm nights.

"It's not a lie, Abril. I didn't know whose it was until..."

"Until you paid me four hundred euros in worn-out bills so I'd teach you not to fall on your knees?" she cut him off, stepping forward.

Fito, who had been pacing nervously in circles for ten minutes in his gray 2018 regatta hoodie, stepped right between them, raising both hands as if trying to separate two dogs that hadn't yet decided whether to bite or bark.

"All right, easy in the brotherhood," Fito snorted, shaking one foot to dislodge a seashell that had gotten stuck in his flip-flop. "If we get all intense now, low tide is going to hit us and we haven't even logged the first hour of class. Do you have the whistle? Fine, mystery for later. Right now we've got wheel trouble."

"What wheels?" Iván asked, blinking.

The roar of a six-cylinder diesel engine answered for him from the top of the embankment.

It wasn't an elegant rumble. It was a hoarse detonation of black smoke and screeching gears rolling down the dirt path, shaking the dunes. A yellow backhoe, the paint on its bucket eaten away by rust and a Construcciones Arenas & Sons sticker on the cab, came to a screeching halt, parked sideways right across the concrete ramp. Right on the only passable path to the east shore.

The sheet-metal door opened with a sharp click. Lucas Arenas jumped down, without getting dust on his spotless boat shoes.

"Good morning to the resistance," Lucas said. He wore a sky-blue linen shirt with the sleeves folded to the millimeter and a rigid folder tucked under his arm. "Such a sporty scene. Almost looks like you work and everything."

Abril forbade herself three things: throwing the one-eyed seal at his head, asking him if his hair gel dripped in the heat, and ending up in the municipal jail before lunch.

"That ramp is public access, Lucas," Abril muttered, pressing her fist against her thigh. The twelve-kilo board rig was still dangling from her hand like a dead rubber snake. "Get that piece of junk out of here before I call the coastal patrol."

"Call away, call away. With any luck they'll answer the dock landline by Christmas." Lucas smiled with that mirror-rehearsed condescension he saved for days with notary signings. "Consolidation work on the roadbed due to risk of collapse. Urgent mayoral decree. The ramp is provisionally closed for seventy-two hours. I'm truly sorry, honestly. But bathers' safety comes first."

"There are no bathers here, you piece of scum," Fito snapped, pointing at the bay with a hand trembling with sheer rage. "There's a meter of foam and a swell is coming that's going to sweep you all the way to the new promenade."

Lucas didn't even look at him. He fixed his eyes on Iván, evaluating the spotless wetsuit, the yellow board propped against his thighs, and finally, the copper whistle hanging on his chest.

Something changed on Lucas's face. Barely half a second. A hardening at the corner of his lips before recovering his yacht club winner pose.

"Well," Lucas murmured. "I see you've already started private lessons. Too bad you won't be able to log the water practice. If there's no recorded entry and exit of nautical gear through the authorized ramp, the port inspector can't stamp your technical logbook today. And today is the last day before the seal, Sotomayor."

"The sea doesn't have a door, Lucas," Abril said through clenched teeth.

"But the breakwater does. And everything that floats inside the basin needs active launching permission."

Lucas tapped the folder with his knuckles, turned on his heel, and leaned against the excavator's giant wheel, crossing his arms with the exasperating calm of someone who has already been paid in advance.

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The westerly wind was beginning to whistle viciously against the old sheet metal of the shack, striking that rhythmic hum Abril had known since childhood: the exact prelude that the Black Cliff breakwater was getting unruly. A massive wave, nearly three meters of vertical wall, crashed against the tip of the pier, kicking up a plume of white foam that fell like fine rain onto the concrete.

Fito kicked an empty can that rolled all the way to the machine's wheel.

"It's over," Fito said, letting himself drop onto the dry sand. "He's got his bucket at our throats. Without the ramp there's no log, and without the log the shed becomes his at five."

"Abril," Iván called out. He had stepped closer, setting the board on the ground. The sun bounced off the chipped fiber with a blinding flash. "If I enter the water from the east shore and paddle across to the mouth to log the entry at the port beacon, does it count as activity?"

"Are you crazy?" Abril turned toward him, glaring daggers. "Have you seen what's rolling in from outside? That current will smash you against the blocks in two minutes. You barely know how to stay lying down without listing."

"I know how to paddle," he insisted, and for the first time there was no trace of shyness or irony in his clear eyes. "And I know why your grandmother wouldn't let go of this whistle. She gave it to me, Abril. The night she died, it didn't disappear from the shack. She put it in my hand at the capital hospital."

Abril stood still. The air jammed in her throat.

"She never left this town," she whispered.

"She left once. And you weren't here because you were competing in France," Iván replied with a calm that hurt worse than an insult. "Don't let this asshole take your school away because of fear of going in there. Resentment weighs precisely the same as lead when you are trying not to drown."

Before she could process the sentence—before she could yell at him to stop, that he had no idea what was beneath that grayish foam—Iván grabbed the yellow board by the rail, adjusted the velcro to his right ankle, and broke into a run toward the east shore.

"Iván, no!" Fito bellowed, jumping up.

"Get back here, you idiot!" Abril screamed, running after him over the soft sand that devoured her steps.

Iván threw himself clumsily into the water, pressing his chest against the melted paraffin and digging his arms into the water with a disastrous but desperate technique. He managed to clear the first whitewater by sheer brute push, mounting the slope of the inner break just as the big set began to rise on the horizon.

From the excavator, Lucas straightened up, losing his smile for a split second.

"He's heading straight for the breakwater rip!" Fito shouted, putting his hands to his head. "The wind is pushing him toward the pilings!"

Abril stopped dead on the exact line where the foam died on the sand. The saltwater touched the tips of her barefoot toes and a freezing cramp crawled up her legs. It had been three years since she had set foot in that break. Three years since the last time the sea had ripped something away from her.

Fifty meters out, a dark mass of water over three meters tall rose like a concave wall in front of Iván. He tried to sit up on the board to turn, but the undertow had already caught him by the tail.

The wave dropped.

The impact echoed in the cove like a dull thunder that made the gravel tremble beneath Abril's feet. The crest buried Iván's figure against the blind angle of the concrete breakwater.

Three seconds later, a sharp crack, similar to a thick branch snapping in two, rang out above the roar of the westerlies.

The front half of the yellow board emerged tumbling through the foam, splintered, with fiberglass strands hanging like torn tendons.

Of Iván, only the black cord remained, floating adrift near the pilings.

Abril took a step toward the water.

End of Episode 3 · of 4

The Westerly Break

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